Thursday, January 22, 2015

The Phoenix
By Tessa
Warning this story is very fake!!!
          The Phoenix is a rare creature and every child wanted this friendly flaming bird (P.S. this is a magical world and nothing burns down). The children were doing extra chores to get money to buy a Phoenix!  The children even snuck into their parent’s room and stole money to buy a Phoenix!  All the children ran to pet stores to get a Phoenix.  Lines were very long so people had to camp out to get a Phoenix.
          One day a 5 year old girl named Ashley waited in line for a Phoenix.  She waited day and night hour by hour minute by minute second by… you get my point.  Ashley finally got a Phoenix and while she was in the pet stores she also saw Unicorns, Pegasus, and Alicorns. She brought her Phoenix home and named it Flames. 
Flames was the most fabulous Phoenix in the whole wide world.  Ashley took flames for a fly to stretch his wings.  Flames flew Ashley over to an abandoned hut.  Ashley went inside and smelled a delicious smell.  Ashley yelled “Hello, anybody home?” No one answered. “Huh, I guess no one is here.” Ashley thought “wait I should just follow the smell.  Flames will protect me… won’t he?”  Ashley followed the smell into a basement then peeked around the corner.


Do  you  want  to  know  what  Ashley Saw  when  she  peeked  around  the corner????



Find out in part 2

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